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Undoubtedly, The Internet makes the world smaller and people get more interconnected, which has a great impact on our society and economy. In my opinion, the impact of the Internet on education is huge. First of all, to teachers, using the Internet to teach is more efficient. For instance, teachers can use online learning platform which includes various interesting activities, challenging tasks and quiz to increase students' responsibilities by dealing with them. Comparing with traditional teaching, this new teaching will make students learn more effective because the traditional teaching just drive students to receive knowledge and assignments while the new one will make students participate in the process of learning, they will find the question and make a resolution. In addition, it can increase students' motivation and makes learning more fun and interesting if a teacher uses the Internet to teach in the classroom. Secondly, to students, it is beneficial for them to use the Internet to learn. It needs to mention that online education is becoming ubiquitous. The power of consumer-orientated devices like Khan Academy, Code Academy makes anytime, anywhere learning more common and accessible to all. Students can learn whatever they want and it also saves their money to study aboard or even just sit in front of the computer at home without school. Furthermore, it is a quick way for them to use it to obtain the useful information, yet they need to learn how to be critical to online information. Last but not least, it can also increase students' sphere. To sum up, the Internet makes education go from strength to strength. Not only does it help students to obtain more knowledge, but provides teachers with a more useful teaching tool.