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句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
I wrote your letter that you will go to China in a short time. My hometown is very beautiful. When you go to my hometown you shuold reserve a room in husehold hotel. you can opt two type in there. On one hand, you can book single room that need pay for thirty everday. On the other hand, you can reserve double room that cost twenty for everybody. For food just cast twenty per day. Both you and owner can have a lunch in the household hotel. And you can use menu to book dishes, Certainly, you also can cook food by yourself. There are many interesting things in my hometwon. you can go to valley to have a riskas well as go to swimming pool to swim. Sometimes, you can choose to climb mountain.
