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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
I wrote your letter that you said you would go to China in a short time. My hometown is very beautiful. When you go to my hometown you should reserve a room in household hotel. You can choose two types. On the one hand, you can book single room that you need pay for thirty every day. On the other hand, you can reserve double room that cost twenty for everybody. For food just cast twenty per day. Both you and owner can have lunch in the household hotel. And you can use menu to book dishes. Certainly, you can also cook food by yourself. There are many interesting things in my hometown. Not only you can go to valley to have a risk but also you can choose to swimming pool to swim. As well as you can choose to climb mountain.
