2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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in China ,more and more people very love train ,and china people very friendly and hot . if you come ,you must love to it . first all of ,china have a lot of city very beautiful ,invironment very clead,deside,the city has China culture ,for example Guilin and Yunnan .this city not only have interesting place ,but also have very deliclous food.