文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺,单词拼写也要更仔细。
In this special day--Teacher's Day,i want to give some sincere greetings to my teachers,because they often help me to solve some problems and always encourage me to study.Besides,my teachers told me to smile at life fluently everyday. Look at this title,it reminded me of my English teacher.At that time,i thought i was so slumsy,because i alwanys made misticks in the English exam,which resulted in failling it.I felt very sad.At this time,my English teacher were coming and encourage me to do everything.Meanwhile,she often help me in English learning. So,i want to give some sincere greetings to my teachers.As for me,i will study hard and look for a good job when i graduate from school so as to make contributions to society.