小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she have black long hair, two big black eyes and red mouth. she voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , play computer games and chess. she is very nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.