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2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

发布时间:2013-05-17 00:23浏览次数:1111
要求:
Teacher‟s Day :    
1. 向老师致以节日的问候。   
2. 回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。   
3. 我如何报答老师。
用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

In this special day--Teacher's Day,i want to give some sincere greetings to my teachers,because they often do their favours and always encourage me to study.Besides,my teachers told me to smile at life fluently every day. It reminded me of my English teacher.At that time,i thought i was so slumsy,because i alwanys made misticks in the English exam,which resulted from failling it.I felt more than sad.At this time,my English teacher was coming and encouraged me to do everything.Meanwhile,she often gave her a hand in my English learning. So,i want to give some sincere greetings to my teachers.As for me,i will study hard and look for a good job when i graduate from school so as to make contributions to society.

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