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In this special day--Teacher's Day,i want to give some sincere greetings to my teachers,because they often do their favours and always encourage me to study.Besides,my teachers told me to smile at life fluently every day. It reminded me of my English teacher.At that time,i thought i was so slumsy,because i alwanys made misticks in the English exam,which resulted from failling it.I felt more than sad.At this time,my English teacher was coming and encouraged me to do everything.Meanwhile,she often gave her a hand in my English learning. So,i want to give some sincere greetings to my teachers.As for me,i will study hard and look for a good job when i graduate from school so as to make contributions to society.