句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。
In this special day--Teacher's Day,I want to give some sincere greetings to my teachers,because they often do their favours and always encourage me to study.Besides,my teachers told me to smile at life fluently every day. It reminded me of my English teacher.At that time,I thought i was so slumsy,because I alwanys made misticks in the English exam,which resulted from failing it.I felt more than sad.At this time,my English teacher was coming and inspired me to do everything.Meanwhile,she often gave her a hand in my English learning. So,I want to give some sincere greetings to my teachers.As for me,I will study hard and look for a good job when I graduate from school so as to make contributions to do some useful things in society.