句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
In this special day--Teacher's Day,I want to give some sincere greetings to my teachers,because they often do their favours and always encourage me to study.Besides,my teachers told me to smile at life fluently every day. It reminded me of my English teacher.At that time,I thought i was so clumsy,because I alwanys made mistake in the English exam,which resulted from failing it.I felt more than sorrowful.At this time,my English teacher was coming and inspired me to do everything.Meanwhile,she often gave her a hand in my English learning. So,I want to give some sincere greetings to my teachers.As for me,I will study hard and look for a good job when I graduate from school so as to make contributions to do some useful things in society.