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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9088
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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拼写做得很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。

用户练习作文:

In my opinion, learning on the internet has two impacts , one is that you can gain as much knowledge you want , the other is that you can just absorb the information from the internet but lost the chance to exchange different opinions with others face to face. Although you can obtain knowledge from learning on the internet, education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. The reasons are followed, when we are learning in the school, we still need teacher to instruct us and classmate to communicate with us even if we have got the books which involved many information just like the internet.That means information is something of dead things , only when we practice it with other's help, can it be our own knowledge. That is what education means, and education is not only information but also communication. Except that, education is not only teaching people knowledge in the book or internet, but also teaching us how to be a good citizen, a creative human , a kind man. Anyway, education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain informtion. We need to learn to be a real human from our education yet only gain information on the internet.

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