文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
With the devellopment of the science and technology, people can get knowledge by a various of ways, such as Internet. However, many people only study for study and ignore that apply what they learn to practice. As far as i am concerned, knowledge is a treature, but practice is the key to it. Zhi Shang Tan Bin is a example. The story said that one person who did not apply knowledge to practice make a big failure in one bottle, which tells us that knowledge that can not be applied to practice is useless. As a saying goes, practice is the only measure that proves one theory is true or wrong. So I firmly believe that we not only learn knowledge but also can apply them to practice.
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