作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。
With the development of the science and technology, people can get knowledge by various ways, such as Internet. However, many people only study for study and ignore that apply what they learn to practice. As far as I am concerned, knowledge is a treature, but practice is the key to it. Zhi Shang Tan Bin is an example. The story said that one person who did not apply knowledge to practice make a big failure in one bottle, which tells us that knowledge that can not be applied to practice is useless. As a saying goes, practice is the only measure that proves one theory is true or wrong. So I firmly believe that we not only get knowledge by a variety of ways but also can apply them to practice.
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