语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
With the development of the science and technology, people can get knowledge by various ways, such as Internet. However, many people only study for study and ignore that apply what they learn to practice. As far as I am concerned, knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it. Zhi Shang Tan Bin is an example. The story said that one person who did not apply knowledge to practice in daily life makes a big failure in one bottle, which shows us that knowledge that can not be applied to practice is useless. As a saying goes, practice is the only measure that proves one theory is true or wrong. So I firmly believe that we not only get knowledge by a variety of ways but also can apply themselves to practice.
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