2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

With the evolution of techology,more and more people prefer to communite and study by means of computer rather than life in real life,which is a provok thinking problem. In terms of the modern society,man and computer have unsepartable connection.For one thing,we can refer to everything we want to due to computer covers different fields.To large extend,computer help us tackle many thing.For another thing,computer change our life from country to person,which is unprecedened.For the last thing,man creat computer so as to benefit to us,neverthless,it's unavodible to come into being some merits.If we addcitied to it,we will lose ourselves. In word,we are supposed to make good use of computer so as to improve our life constantly.