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What would you do when you see a man cutting the tree?To stop the man's behaviour or ignore it?I think a lot of people will walk on and stop it,but the man is really cutting the tree? Nowadays,many people like judge a thing by their first seeing or hearing,however,what they see are not always the truth.For example,the man cutting the tree,whever the man destory the tree?Not really.He may make the first aid to the tree,because the tree are eatting by the insert,the man were cutting the insert to catch them.So the man's behaviour are reasve the tree,if you stop it you may fell exhasited. In a word,we shouldn't judge a person or a thing by you first felling,it always mislead you.So,it not wisely to draw a conclusion by you first seeing or hearing.
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