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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;文章用词有些单一,请加强单词拼写的检查;采用了一些简单的从句。

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What would you do when you see a man cutting the tree?To stop the man's behaviour or ignore it?I think a lot of people will walk on and stop it,but the man is really cutting the tree? Nowadays,many people like judge a thing by their first seeing or hearing,however,what they see are not always the truth.For example,the man cutting the tree,whever the man destory the tree?Not really.He may make the first aid to the tree,because the tree are eatting by the insert,the man were cutting the insert to catch them.So the man's behaviour are reasve the tree,if you stop it you may fell exhasited. In a word,we shouldn't judge a person or a thing by you first felling,it always mislead you.So,it not wisely to draw a conclusion by you first seeing or hearing.

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