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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36945
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分55.5分
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作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;文中从句过少;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨。

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A: after a gentle song, welcome back to our program. I’m your friend A. B: and I’m your another old friend B. A: ei? B, it’s time to have a lunch, aren’t you feel hungry? B: absolutely yes! But, I have to do something more important than it. A: you? Oh, nice~ I think share something useful to our freshmen is a really really important thing. Do you think so? B: are you reading my mind? A: we have been the partner a long time after all. B: so, what do you want to share? A: um… you know, our dear freshmen are having military these days. So, as an upperclassman who is warm-hearted, friendly, and full of love, I’d like to let them know that pass or suffer, is up to yourself….(B插话) B: are you kidding us?!! A: ok ok, just play a joke~ B: I want to keep a long distant with you~ A: come on, come on, our program have to go on now~ B: ok! please without further ado, let us know your mind! A: actually, I really want to talk about the military. B: good, interesting. A: first, I want to ask you a serious question. B: come on.

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