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作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
A: after a gentle song, welcome back to our program. I’m your friend A.
B: and I’m your another old friend B.
A: ei? B, it’s time to have a lunch, aren’t you feel hungry?
B: absolutely yes! But, I have to do something more important than it.
A: you? Oh, nice~ I think share something useful to our freshmen is a really really important thing. Do you think so?
B: are you reading my mind?
A: we have been the partner a long time after all.
B: so, what do you want to share?
A: um… you know, our dear freshmen are having military these days. So, as an upperclassman who is warm-hearted, friendly, and full of love, I’d like to let them know that pass or suffer, is up to yourself….(B插话)
B: are you kidding us?!!
A: ok ok, just play a joke~
B: I want to keep a long distant with you~
A: come on, come on, our program have to go on now~
B: ok! please without further ado, let us know your mind!
A: actually, I really want to talk about the military.
B: good, interesting.
A: first, I want to ask you a serious question.
B: come on.
A: have you ever compared your former look with your latter look during your military training times?
B: yes! I had! Believe it or not, my former look was Er Kang, you know?
A: what?
B: Er Kang, do you remember the role in an Chinese classical costume drams called 还珠格格？
A: oh~ yeah yeah yeah~
B: yep, and my latter look was Bao Zheng. 包拯
A: oh, I’m sorry to hear that, but now I look at you and I believe you have recovered from that tragedy. Didn’t you use sunscreen cream?
B: of course! I even take it with me. My drillmaster merely commanded us standing posture training at least 20min once under the sun. nay, my whole train was hardly companied without the sunshine. Oh, it reminds me of a ridiculous thing, but you know, I am a shy girl, so…
A: come on, don’t be shy. It is an open program, you’d like to talk anything you like~
B: it is sanitary pads. I used it as my insoles.
A: a little ridiculous but it was really a good thinking.
B: yes, they have first-rate sweat absorption qualities and what’s more, they alleviate the original insoles’ weakness of being too hard.
A: yeah, They are truly necessities for military training.~
B: ei? A, do you remember the military boxing(军体拳) our drillmasters showed us?
A: yeah~ they were so cool at that time!
B: did your drillmaster teach you?
A: no~ but I really want to try it.
B: and do you know military training can traces back to the feudal era in China? At that time, the major content of military training was learning archery and driving chariots.
A: wow~ it can’t be described as cool~（这简直不能用酷来形容了/这比酷还酷）
B: although my drillmaster didn’t teach our the military boxing also, and it is impossible for us to learn archery and drive chariot in our military training today, I still remember the thing we often did was the repeated formation training, such as attention(立正)，at ease(稍息)，halt(立定)，salute(敬礼), right-dress(向右看齐), eyes-front(向前看) and so on.
A: and an assortment of dizzying turning.
B: and the endless order of picking up the bottle and then putting it down. I think the drillmasters were crazy.
A: you know, I hoped nothing more than it would rain. So I could have a chance to sit aside.
B: Um… although military training is maybe a hard time for the freshmen to through, it is really good for themselves, just like a compulsory course.
A: yes I can’t agree more with you.
B: according to university world news, officially the military training, known as Junxun in China is to “enhance students’ sense of national defence and national security awareness”. But it is also regarded as important for building teamwork, instilling collectivism and toughening up “Little Emperors” of the spoilt youth.
A: yep, so, dear freshmen, enjoy your last time of military training, you believe you can or not.
B: so, it seems like our program is going to be over soon?
A: yeah, but we still have a part.
B: yep, this is the first program in this semester and we had collected the songs our dear audiences sent for us.
A: so at the end of our program, let’s enjoy the song
