采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇基础扎实,注意文中极个别的拼写错误。
In our society, the life is becoming more and more colorful and flexible, so we probably will encounter many things every day that may be not easy to deal with them for us. Some people may say that they lack of happiness. In fact, happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. When are studying in school, many things may occur on us in some uncertain time. For example, we may not acquire a good grade in a exam and this will cause a bad mood. otherwise, the roommate is not much kind or have a quarrel some time and this maybe a bad thing, so many people don't konw this need us keep a good attitude to deal with. so how we can develop our ability to deal with problems. At first, keep a good attitede to life because this will be the prior condition to deal with people. Secondly, don't be panic when encountering some problems. Finally, study some new and practical skills in daily life that will help us to deal with problems more quickly.