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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4831
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

In our society, the life is becoming more and more colorful and flexible, so we probably will encounter many things every day that may not be easy to deal with them for us. Some people may say that they lack of happiness. In fact, happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. When are studying in school, many things may occur to us in some uncertain time. For example, we may not acquire a good grade in the exam and this will cause a bad mood. Otherwise, the roommate is not much kind or has a quarrel with us some time and this maybe a bad thing, so many people don't know that this need us keep a good attitude to deal with. So how we can develop our ability to deal with problems. At first, keep a good attitude to life because this will be the prior condition to deal with people. Secondly, don't be panic when encountering some problems. Finally, study some new and practical skills in daily life that will help us to deal with problems more quickly.

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