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The impact of the internet on interpersonal Communication As you can see,nowadays,with the surprising development of electric technologies,our communication has changed a lot from face-to-face to online talking.In the terms of the phenonmenon,views from person to person.For me,i recon that we shouldn't abuse internet,but reasonable use. For one thing,we can make different friends cover whole world via internet.Instead,we also cheat by others.For another thing,it's convient for us to transmit information we need to.Neverthless,if we always rely on internet,maybe isolate ourselves from the real life.For the last thing,to some extend,face-to-face communication is good than using internet. All in all,as human beings,we aren't supposesd to contact with others through internet always,it's necessary for us to communicate with face-to-face.
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