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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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从句使用量不足;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇表达比较恰当,避免拼写错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

The impact of the internet on interpersonal Communication As you can see,nowadays,with the surprising development of electric technologies,our communication has changed a lot from face-to-face to online talking.In the terms of the phenonmenon,views from person to person.For me,i recon that we shouldn't abuse internet,but reasonable use. For one thing,we can make different friends cover whole world via internet.Instead,we also cheat by others.For another thing,it's convient for us to transmit information we need to.Neverthless,if we always rely on internet,maybe isolate ourselves from the real life.For the last thing,to some extend,face-to-face communication is good than using internet. All in all,as human beings,we aren't supposesd to contact with others through internet always,it's necessary for us to communicate with face-to-face.

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