Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
The use of the mobile phone in people's life is increasing nowadays. The mobile phone can bring a lot of convenience to our life, it can help us to contact each other more easily than before. But in my opinion, if people overuse the mobile phone, it will conduct negative consequence. The principal reason for my view is that mobile phone can distract your attention when you are crossing the street or you are driving, this dangerous behaviors could occur the accident. The second reason for my view is that people spend too much time on the mobile phone instead of talking to family members and friends. It is not good for our relationship between us to our close relative. in addition, reading on the phone is harmful for our eyesight. and also we will get some radiant to our brain. at last, some children play video games on the phone, they donot have time to do their home worker. in sum, I recommend that we can keep using mobile phone with limited time.
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