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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11298
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

The use of the mobile phone in people's life is increasing nowadays. The mobile phone can bring a lot of convenience to our life, we can contact each other more easily than before by it. But in my opinion, it will have negative consequences to overuse the mobile phone. The principal reason for my view is that mobile phone can distract your attention when you are crossing the street or you are driving, this dangerous behaviors could lead to the accident. The second reason for my view is that people spend too much time on the mobile phone instead of talking to family members and friends. It is not good for our relationship between us to our close relative. in addition, reading on the phone is harmful for our eyesight. and also we will get some radiant to our brain. at last, some children play video games on the phone, they donot have time to do their home worker. in sum, I recommend that we can keep using mobile phone with limited time.

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