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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11306
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

The use of the mobile phone in people's life is increasing nowadays. The mobile phone can bring a lot of convenience to our life, we can go internet more easily than before by it. But in my opinion, it will have disadvantage consequences to overuse the mobile phone. The principal reason for my view that cell phone could disturb us all day.After cellphone is popular among everyone, people can be contacted by their boss or colleagues anytime, we do not have a quiet holiday any more. In other way, even though someone does not have many phone calls, he may catches the message once every 10 minutes from cell phone instead of paying attention surrounding. For instance, people check the phone when they are crossing the street or they are driving, these behaviours could lead to the traffic accidents. The second reason for my view is that it could give a negative impact to our relationship between us and our close relative and our friends. Have you ever seen this sense? A group of people were sitting together at a restaurant, however, everyone looked down their smart phone. Is not it so ridiculous? From philological To have face to face interaction is always better than to contact person on internet. In addition, excessive use of cell phone could lead to health issue. Reading on the phone is harmful to our eyesight, also we will get some radiation to our brains. At last, some children play video games on the phone, they do not have enough time to do their homework and play outside. In sum, for these reasons, I recommend that we can limit the use of mobile phones and use it appropriately and rationally. My solution is that cell phone manufacturer design an app of limiting the time of using cell phone and encourage everyone download this app.

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