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The importance of extracurricular activities When it comes to talk about the importance of extracurricular activities, many people would say that they can run every morning, or hang out with their own firends. Well, personally, I believe that we should organize some outdoor activities. In order to cultivate friendship with classmates. There are a number of virtues that organize extracurricular activities. The reasons are as follows. First of all. I think people can go to beautiful palace, where has famous mountains and great rivers. What's more important, extracurricular activities also broaden our horizons. In addition, college life should not only read books in the library or stay in the dormitory. people willing to go outside to enjoy the views. Last but not least. it is our fate that meet each other. Therefore, we should cherish the rest of the college time. go out and paly fun. In summary, on account of the aforementioned. I suggest that we still have much time to go outside and enjoy the varied and colorful school life.
