复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中高级词汇使用熟练,在单词拼写方面要继续努力;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Under the strong stress society,more and more students are faced with mental health.It is universally ackonwledged that mental health piay vary important role in our life.Owniing a healthy mental is necessary for students in every fields.As a student,we need to learn how to keep mental health so as to achieve ourselves. First and foremost,hardships is unavodable,thus, we should confrant them with positive attitude and full courage.In the meanwhile,we can calm ourselves down via listen some soft music or walking with best friends,Last but not least,armed with strong will,it not only resist a lot obstcles but also tackle some problems we can accept. I always persist that everyone ought to beat mental envil only we use right ways.A healthy mental can help us to change our life.