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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1953
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇使用比较灵活;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Under the big society with strong competiton,more and more students are faced with mental health.It is universally ackonwledged that mental health play very important role in our life.Owning a healthy mental is necessary for students in every field.As a student,we need to learn how to keep mental health so as to achieve ourselves. First and foremost,hardships is unavoidable,thus, we should confront them with positive attitude and full courage.In the meanwhile,we can calm ourselves down via listening to some soft music or walking with best friends.Last but not least,armed with a strong will,it not only resist a lot obstacles but also tackle some problems we can accept. I always persist that everyone ought to beat mental evil only we use right ways.A healthy mental can help we to change our life.

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