托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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firstly, people pay more attention to relaxation rather than pressure. undoubtedly, people nowadays undergo a great deal of pressure that comes from various direction, including work, school. and so forth. pressure is detrimental rather than instrumentaland it has been one of the biggest enemies. it hurts our health, personality, and relationship with others. statistical report from a research institute proved that it is hard to find an ailment that cannot trace in some way to pressure. to keep healthy efficiently, an increasing proportion of people pursue all kinds of ways to escape from pressure, including taking a short or long vacation, having a party with friends at weekend, or traveling to other countries. what is more, television and music also help relax us. therefore, escaping from pressure is the foremost reason why we living longer now.