2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
Hello,My name is Scarlett. Have you heard this English name? I do believe that you are quite familiar with this name. LIke most of young teenager, I’m very like watch movie ,especial in Romance. she at difficult of time presume to undertake a responsibility, although also have commotion, the end still undertake a responsibility, for example she saved the plum 兰妮 , she is heavy to flap tower to pull a park, helping the 阿仕莱 an etc. over a long period of time afterwards. The second she presumes to love, with no regret, one of her youth all Be loving the 阿仕莱 , have no repay but she still didn't give up an effort, until the extreme limit of[with] ability.