2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Hello,my name is Scarlett. Have you heard this English name? I do believe that you are quite familiar with this name. LIke most of young teenager,I enjoy movie ,especial in Romance. I see a movie again and again, if I like it very much. Gone With the Wind, the pififul story deeply softened my heart. Scarlett is a very beautiful girl, who is one of the most impressive images in world literature.