2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;文中从句数量过少;可适当增加文中高级词汇的使用,注意文中个别拼写错误;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Hello,my name is Scarlett. Have you heard this English name? I do believe that you are quite familiar with this name. LIke most of young teenager,I enjoy movie ,especial in Romance. I see a movie again and again, if I like it very much. Gone With the Wind, the pitiful story deeply softened my heart. Scarlett is a very beautiful girl, who is one of the most impressive images in world literature. I intitle Scarlett, not, of course, because of I love this role but because of she set a good example to me. Never yield to difficult, never complain about life