雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

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In China,both of the parents have their jobs. With the development of economy,people tend to pursue high quality living conditions most of the parents offer their children comfortable circumstance,but seldom have time to stay with their children. In my point of view,no matter how busy they are ,they should make the best use of their time to stay with their children. First,the love between the adults and children will be improved by spending more time on their children. The children could feel the adult's affection through the genial conversation and sharing their pleasure with them. Every time ,when parents take them to amusement park,help them to prepare their birthday parties,applaud them when they are competing in their sports meeting .the time they spend with children will become treasure in their memories. Second,the children need direction from parents. There are some wrong hehavior in our society such as violence,corruption,dishonesty and so on. But children have weak resistance to this detrimental influence. In this case,the parent's instructions seem to be very important to children's growth. They should sit down and talk with them about what they should do and not do. In addition ,if parents often spend time in staying with children ,the adult's good behavior will greatly influence the children I do not deny there are some disadvantages in spending too much time on children some parents restrict their children and give them little freedom to develop their interests. I emphasize the parents should educate and instruct their children in their spare time apart from their busy work.