采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
I have a good friend, her name is Liza, she is so beautiful girl, she has a long hair, she likes watch TV everyday, she was a nice people, I like to talk with her. We are go to school together, and go to do homework after class, sometimes we will watched TV together or play games.