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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6290
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;作者在句法层面做的很棒;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Every coin has two sides.Putting all your eggs in one basket,likely,has both advantages and disadvantages.Yet,in my opinion,the disadvantages of putting your eggs in one basket far outweigh its advantages.Thus,it is never too careful to always have plan B when we cope with important events. Nobody can know what is going to happen in the future.When unexpected accidents happened,you would find yourself in a desperate situation,losing everything you have ,even lost your faith.Putting all you have in one thing equals to putting all the risks and pressures together.That’s why we need to think about all the possible risks and prepare extra plans ahead before we make decisions on important events.In other words,we must have different plans and preparations for fear of undesirable results. In conclusion,it is unadvisable to put all eggs in only one basket.That’s because this may give rise to unaffordable and unexpected consequences which might make you disappointed and annoyed.Therefore,I assert that we should have alternative choices to assure everything goes well.

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