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I was taking with the professor of psychology who is called Kelly lam in last weekend and we talking about student of china share with feeling ’s opinion. Regardless of happy or sad,more than 30 percent student is no willing to communicate with others.What's more, students aren't understanding the importance of sharing learn form our education. The expert suggests it is necessary for us share feeling in today ’s word.In addition,we should know how to share our feeling because it is good for our grow-up in the future.