小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；部分长句用的不错，但从句比例偏少。

i have a good friend,his name is Mengze Wu,he is also my roommate.there are some reasons we love him as the following.first of all, he has very good sense of humor,we are very happy when he come back home,second,he often help others who is in need,and never complain it.moreover,he is a hardworking person,and he is responsible for his business.that is all .