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The past four years have witnessed my growth from a girl of innocence to a woman of maturity, leaving so many happy memories and unique experiences that I will forever cherish. My lovely college years have equipped me with the qualities of keeping learning, cooperative spirit and independence which will help me to start my future career and life without the protection from my parents and school. The spirit of keeping learning is a much-valued virture which I gradually cultivated in college. It is true that the four years’ study have made me, to some extent, a relatively learned man, and a career woman in my future days. However, what I want to emphasize is that the belief of never giving up study restored in my college days may be much more valuable than the knowledge I actually learned in the class, and this spirit will benefit me for a life-long time.
