2004年考研英语作文真题:终点又是起点

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写方面做得很棒，平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用。

As is above,there is an athlete who is arriving at the end,but,at the same time,a new beginning has appeared.It just like our life-the end is the new beginning. We always from one side to another side or one point to another point again and again. Although there is an end of a period,it is essential for us to keep going.A good case coming to my mind is the champion,who won the game and insist on it.This phenomenon is not isolated. It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the relation of end and begin.