2004年考研英语作文真题:终点又是起点

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。

What is presented in this picture is a man who is running toward the end of a race and sweating all over.Although there is nothing special about the man and the race possibly,the end line impresses on me for it is both "end line" and "starting line" if we reflect on it from another aspect. Our life also like what picture displayed.A good case coming to my mind is the champion of this race,who will become an ordinary runner if he considers that this line is the end of his sporting career or realize that he has reached his target or goal.By contrast,an ambitious runner will realize that this success is the starting point for a new race and he will be impulsed by this success.Obviously,the way we look at things determines how far we will go.If we feel content with the ability to read and write,perhaps we will not strive to get a college education.Moreover,if we think a bachelor degree is quite enough, we will not take pains to pass examination for postgraduate.It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the relation of end line and starting line.Life is just like an endless race.You will be either disqualified from the race or surpassed by others If we don't prepare for new race.That why the finish line is also a starting line. This picture really impresses on me and I like it,too.From now on,I will become more active and take the initiative.