2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者词汇表达丰富灵活，学术词汇使用也较熟练，要注意避免个别拼写错误；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

The way to success It`s widely acknowledged that there always has no shortage of person who is stubborn to pursue the success in all ways.No doubt,lots of people have us witnessed their success in different areas using their struggling experience life,regardless of whatever aims they had. However,the similar aspects of all the successful storys,in my view,is mainly consisted in the characteristic--persistence.The New-Oriental School`s founder--Yu Minghong has set a good example for us,for his career life can be a perfect explaination for the reason.During his college life,he had insisted to read the English books and recite the new words in the every morning at the same place,wether it`s cold or hot.His roommates saw him as a monster with an idiot habit and persisting for so long.Meanwhile,such negative words like crazy or mad were never disappeared,for the simple reason that while his peers was busy to enjoying their beautiful college life,he was doing the same silly thing all the time.That seemingly silly habit,much to their expection,planted an essential seed for his later great achievements. Given that above description,we can easily come to the conclusion that he finally became the founder of the china biggest language school,which is greatly related to his persistence.Never giving up and believing yourself are the most immportant factors that stimulated his success.Only when they are accumulated to some degree can we hunt for the ripe fruits.