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Dear Mike I'm glad to that you're going to visist my hometown. And I will showe you the most beautiful scenery and the most delicious food in our honetown, you just come on quickly. My hometown is Guangzhou, where is the capital of Guangzhou. Guangzhou has a long history in Guangdong and Guangzhou is famous by its business in china. Guangzhou has the most highter radio tower in china, which more than 600 mile.You can overlook the whole Guangzhou in the last stair of the Guangzhou tower. With the development of education of econimic, Guangzhou is more and more moernize,where not only has the most convenient traffic in china and you can go everywhere quickly, but also has one of the most comtontary building.On the other hand,Guangzhou has many delicious food from other area of china. I guess you can't wait more than a mimule to come to guangzhou after you know so much about guangzhou. I am looking forward to your arrival.