英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语四级> 真题> 2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16930
要求:
题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
用户的作文(系统评分50.0分
评语:

从句使用量不足;文中高级词汇使用贫乏,同时拼写错误稍多;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

Dear Mike I'm glad to that you're going to visist my hometown. And I will showe you the most beautiful scenery and the most delicious food in our honetown, you just come on quickly. My hometown is Guangzhou, where is the capital of Guangzhou. Guangzhou has a long history in Guangdong and Guangzhou is famous by its business in china. Guangzhou has the most highter radio tower in china, which more than 600 mile.You can overlook the whole Guangzhou in the last stair of the Guangzhou tower. With the development of education of econimic, Guangzhou is more and more moernize,where not only has the most convenient traffic in china and you can go everywhere quickly, but also has one of the most comtontary building.On the other hand,Guangzhou has many delicious food from other area of china. I guess you can't wait more than a mimule to come to guangzhou after you know so much about guangzhou. I am looking forward to your arrival.

会员评论0个评论)
KISSWLOVE
金币:1

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:86.0wusaili

人气:60发布:2015-01-10

得分:85.0614545496

人气:86发布:2015-06-13

得分:85.0heake

人气:47发布:2017-05-05

得分:81.0勇yyyy

人气:65发布:2016-04-06

得分:81.0shymsky

人气:25发布:2016-11-29