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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17577
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇使用熟练,但拼写错误要注意;从句数量不足,可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用。

用户练习作文:

Judgemennts are everywhere in our life and we make them snaply or sophisticatedly, which may turn out to be different outcome. According to my experience, most of snap judgements can be untrusted. Firstly, obviously snap judgements is made in short time without comprehensive thinking and is more inflluenced by instinct. Many important factors that would change the outcome are ignored and not be taken into account of. Secondly, snap judgements will result in that all the efforts is in vain. Much of time and resource is wasted under untrusted instruction. In a word, snap judgement is made irresponsibly and can never be trusted.

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