字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
文章衔接手法恰当;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用。
What is presented in the picture are tow men who has different attitude toward the half bottle of water,one man said sorrowfully that there is only half empty while another one said gracefully that there is half full.The different view of the tow men reflecting also is the attitude that we exposed in the life. Frankly speaking,it is obvious that everything has tow sides of positive and negative.A good case coming to my mind is a pessimistic person,who may feel gloomy and distressed facing with a challenge. He will consider too much about his ability and complain about it all the time,refusing to have a try before giving it up.By contrast , an optimistic person may adopt different approach.He inclines to define the challenge as the opportunity to display his abilities and intelligence.This phenomenon is not isolated.it is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of it. In my point of view,although it is natural that we encounter challenges of one kind or another in our life,we should be optimistic whenever we are confronted with challenge. As the proverb goes,"The way you perceive the world will determine your way to cope with it."