注意:
1. 开头和结尾已为你写好(不记入总词数 ); 2. 词数100左右。
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;采用了一些简单的从句。
There are many traffic ways you can choose,such as plane,train.The airport have the NO.45bus,you can get out of the car at the finally step.I wiil go to the station to meet you if you come by train. And I have prepared many activities for you.We will go to the nearby island to playing,where are very beautiful!We can swimming in a blue sea if you want,you can eat some fresh seafood that delicious!Our air is fresh,and we can jogging, mountain climbing and so on. Local people have warm welcomes to you!