2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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The Introduction of My Hometown My home town has many interesting places which I like the most one is Mout Lu.When the weather is very hot and the temperature even can rise to 39 desgrees.So,we can go to lunsan mountain for the hot summer.We can image it's name summer resort is't a lie. In my home town,I'm sure that you will beloved with it's scenery,local conditions and customs.There are friendly and faithful people that you can make good friends.Have you seen China's on the tip of the tongue?The local Specialty are Osmanthus cake,Yunwu Cha,Beans and ans so on.The taste of them is enjoyed by many people.Even some well know abroad. If you have interested in my hometown,please don't hesitate to contact me.I'd be happy to show you around my town.We'll be expecting you.