小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强。

i have a good friend she is a girl she is twtenty she is tall she has black long hair she has big eyes she likes smile she study is very well she like math because she think is interesting she likes read books play coumpeter games she likes shoppe we often go to the movie