请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;请注意积累词汇量;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
I have a good friend.she is a girl. she is twenty.she is tall.she has black long hair.she has big eyes.she likes smile. she study is very well.she likes math because she think the math is interesting.she likes reading books and playing computer games.she likes shoppe.we often go to the movies.