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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:环境 Environment

发布时间:2013-07-10 16:40浏览次数:1215
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The graph contains information about the population of birds in Europe over a period of twenty four years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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The diagram demonstrates that the number of birds changed in Europe throughout a period of twenty four years. It is typically that the trend of the population of birds declined considerably.Only between 1977 and 1980,1986-1989 and 1992-1995,there was an upward trend. Particularly,in 1980 the number of birds reached the peak at about 125 million. By contrast,the 6 years from 1900 to 1986 witnessed a rapid decrease of the population of birds from nearly 125 million to roughly 98 million.In addition,a similar pattern was repeated for the number of birds between 1989 and 1992,dropping from about 120 million to approximately 102 million.During 1995 and 2001,the population of birds decreased slightly from about 95 million to 90 million. Overall,the prospect of the population of birds is not optimistic.Numous of birds has disappeared in Europe.

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