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Aremark saying that your eyes wintness must be trued,Thus,we always conclude instantly without hesitation due to it happen in our front.Actually,it's unwisable that made conclusion whchever right or wrong. At present,more and more false thing suround our life.For indtance,some people pretend to fall down so as to cheat others.Besides,a lot of ADs cheat people by means of internet.These examples made us understand that we couldn't judge everything by their face,instead,there is no denying that making concluison via provok thouhing.
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