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使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；作者用词灵活多样，但要注意文中极个别拼写错误；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以。
Will tourism bring harm to the evvironment When it comes to talk about environment, different people hold drifferent views. However, a group numble of people believe that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment. Well, personally, I think it depends on people themselves. The reason are as follows. On the one hand, the development of tourism is benefit us a lot, which can push the economic of the area. What's more important, a lot of people willing to live in the local people's house when they go to travel. Therefore, it also can increase people's income. On the other hand, we can put a little small labels that people who travel here mustn't litter rubish everywhere. Or if they do that, they will have to fine again. All in all, according to above. Tourism booming is a good thing to us. And I think it is up to people they go to travel or not. But if they go to travel, they also should protect the environment. It is our duty to do this.
