2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦167:钢琴家

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Lang Lang is a pianist.He was born in 1982 in Shen Yang,China.He started learning piano since he was 3.He went to America for leaning piano at the age of 14.He has a lot of achievements.He gave corcerts all over the world,and perfored with a great number of famous musicians.Also,he had won many prizes.I am proud of himand wish him to do better.I am fond of his performences and performing skills.His music can bring me happiness.